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Today I upload students narrative texts the composed some days ago.  Would you please choose the best and give your comment?  Please check the spelling, the punctuation, and the originality.

The Bat Who Couldn’t Fy

            Long time ago, there was a bat kingdom.The kingdom was ruled by a cruel king.One day the king was angry and he attack the other bat kingdom.War was begin,he kill everyone but he saw a little baby,he remember that he was old and didn’t have a child.Finally he back to his kingdom and say to his wife that they must pray to the god for give them child.Then they pray to the god ,the god give them a son but their child will get an condemn because his father was very cruel.The son was grown he was very naughty then one day he get an woun because he bled by his friend.His wing was broken.And everybody call him the bat who couldn’t fly. (Alief 9.B)

The Bat Who Couldn't Fly

        One day, in peacefull forest lived a bat. He wants to fly arround

forest. He thinks that he can fly IN the morning. In the morning, he

tries to fly, but he can't. He can't fly because he can't see what is

arround him. So he always hits tree and fall down. He always tries to

do same things every morning. After several trying he gives up. He

can't fly. In the night, he meets other bat and see that he can fly in

that forest. He asked to the other bat. How could he fly, and said

that he had tried to fly in the morning but can't. The other bats said

that he couldn't fly in the morning. You must use your instinct. Then

the bat tries to fly after several trying. And now he can. He use his

ultrasonic sound to look arround. Then both of them play together

happily. (Abror 9.B)

The Bat Who Couldn’t Fly

  Long time ago,there was a bat arrogant. He like was bad to people, because he have all,and he is cruel. didn’t have friendship with him. Next day he was averge fly at the garden. With arrogant, he was hit tree and broken wing.he was to regreg about it and he was promise didn’t arrogant to peple. (Aisyah 9.B)

One second I was staring at the ceiling in my room and the next I was on a pirate ship. There was a cool breeze and fog slightly blocked the sun. I looked down and saw I was wearing a pirate'scomplete uniform from the stripped shirt to the black boots. I looked up and was surprised to see my friend Marlene wearing the exact same outfit. "What are your orders Captain?" she said. I lookedaround but there was no one else, she was talking to me. "Captain?" I said. "Yes, where do we gonext?" Marlene asked. I decided to go along with it and told her to go East until we hit land. As I walked around the pirate ship I stumbled across the giant cannons, barrels of gunpowder, and a roomfull of gold objects. "Marlene, what is this?" I asked. "Stop playing around, it is all the" loot "you stole,"she Responded. Stole! I could not believe what I was hearing. I would never steal anything. Suddenlya giant wave Came up over the boat and crashed on top of me. I gasped for air and looked over atMarlene. She squeezed her hair out and continued as normal. As we continued sailing I Came acrossdolphins, whales, and even a giant squid. Finally after hours of seeing nothing but water we spottedan island. We only needed a couple more miles. Out of nowhere another giant waved Came crashingdown on top of me. I opened my eyes and there was the ceiling again. What a dream! What ajourney! (Fahma Firda9.D)

1.       THE BAT WHO COULDN’T  FLY

Long time ago,there wasa bat,the bat name is Tina.once morning she is flying with happily.However in the road she was hit a tree.Broakkk.

                Tina :”Na na na,I’m free,I can fly,I can fly,and I....Can....Fly....,Huaaaa “

Tina can’t clear the treak from the hit,and her wing is broken,she is sadly,because the wing is broken.

               

                Tina        :”mami my wing is broken!!!!!!”

                The bird :”what happen tina with you?Oh My Good,your wing?,ok I would

                                     bring you to your house.”

The bird bring tina to her house,suddenly her mother crying and scream “TINA”.

                Mother  :”Tina what happen with you?are you sure?why?”

                The bird :”Mmay be she is hit a tree,and the wing is roken.”

                Mother  :”Oh my good,qonsequently you must be carefully.”

                Tina        :”I’m sorry mom,i don’t know if in my fron is a tree.”

                The bird :”May be she can fly 1 month again.”

                Tina        :”Are you sure?

                Mother  :”The bird is right,you must take a rest for your revosery.”

After the accident Tina always be carefully if she flying.And she can fly and feel a cool air,a view,and ect. (Diana Septi 9.B)

7. “My Journey on a Pirate Ship.”

   We relax on the big cruise ship we are on. It is day three of a seven day trip across the ocean. We sit at the restaurant and eat the all you can eat buffet. I go up and look out the window and see a bunch of small boats in a distant coming closer and closer to the ship. I didn’t know if what to do so I decided to go back to my room and take a nap. As I woke up I noticed everyone running around and the ship was different, it was the same atmosphere that it was before. I opened my door and a random person on the ship came in and said that the ship was being taken over by pirates. I knew we needed to call for help but my cell phone didn’t work and there wasn’t an emergency phone in sight. I kept hoping that everything would be alright and that the pirates would go away after they got what they needed. Then all of a sudden one pirate came up to me and said hello and walked away. All of them were leaving and they got what they had wanted. They had taken most of the food and left. The journey went on and I was happy that the ship wasn’t still taken over by pirates. Until it turns out that one pirate stayed on the ship and was driving the ship who knows where. We arrived on the coast of some country and it looked very nice. I didn’t know where I was but I wanted to go home. The ship was now taken over by some people on the dock and they started to take us and all of our stuff off the ship. They didn’t want to do anything with us so they let us go and do whatever but they had taken the ship and it was theirs now (Syalwa 9.D)

My journey on a Pirate Ship

My family took a family vacation on a Pirate ship. We all pretended that we were pirates for a weekend. So we rented this Pirate Ship at the dock for the weekend. So when we first got on the ship we thought it was a little weird pretending to be Pirates but after awhile it got kind of fun. Throughout the weekend we were just joking around on deck and pretending to be the best Pirates we could. The weekend was almost over but living on this Pirate ship for the weekend was so much fun and nobody wanted to leave. So we ended up living on this Pirate ship the rest of our lives. To me and my family this was like a dream come true! We never in a million years thought that we would be living on a Pirate Ship. We just sailed around on the ocean for many years and had the best time of our lives. (Elva 9.D)

One day, there are a group of bat who looking for meal at night. They are looking for guava which grow infront of citizen house. After that looking for that guava, that group of bat fly back to their place. And suddenly there is one of bat whose it’s wing is be involved by the branch of abig tree, and then that bat falls, until finally that bat can’t fly follow it’s friends whose have go a far fly leave it. (Nova Dwi 9.d)

“My Journey on a Pirate Ship.” You and your friends can star in the story.

=> One day, I woke up and I realized it isn’t in my bedroom. It was in ship. I didn’t know how could my friends and I were there. My friends still slept. Then I tried to make my friends woke up. “Hey Ghea, hey Eva! Wake up, please!” I said. “Where are we?” asked Eva after woke up from her beautiful dream. “It’s pirate ship, isn’t it?” Ghea looked at me. I was just silent.

“Let’s think, how can we go out from this pirate ship?” Eva said. We were walking around the ship. “Why is it so scary?” asked me. Suddenly, a guy walked toward us. He is a pirate. “Keep calm, friend.” Eva tried to make us feel fine. “After I said, 1.. 2.. 3, let’s jump together to the sea.” Eva said. Ghea and I nodded. “1..2..3.. Jumping!!” we shouted. Finally we jumped into the sea. It was very cold then we tried to finding a island. (Rizky Dwi N 9.E)

The Bat W       ho Couldn’t Fly

            One day, there was a bat who couldn’t fly, he was so sad, but he could sing well, but he wasn’t be confident with his talent. His friends always make sure him if he has a good voice, but he also not be confident. One day, there was a sing competition, his friends force him to follow that competition, finally he wants. In the day of competition, he was so nerveous, but he could do it well. He win, he wasn’t sad again eventhough he couldn’t fly, he was happy. He lifes happily here after, finally...(Nusana 9.A)

 For weeks on end rode the seas,listening to nothing but the foul howls of wind and the
    barks of the captain.Our search of the sirens,the maidens of the sea,was spent horribly in
    vain but no afail.Smith is somewhere about the ship,either gambling or starting some kind
    of rebellion.
        Three days have passed since the last of since the last sign of land were seen.Now,we
    float endlessly among the pile of ruin.No duoubt we're close!The captain has ordered the men
    to take whatever cloth we can scavenge and stuff them in our ears as well as possible.He says
    that once you  hear them sing,you're a changed man.He said it an solemn voice,one that
    changed the meaning of something good into something dangerous.
         "Best be on your guards,them demons will wanna get you!" were the last of his orders
     before we stuffed our ears.We sailed past all the wreck and ice in silence.We heard nothing,
     but we felt every type of fear known to man. (Rizqi Ayu 9.D)

The Bat Who Couldn't Fly

In the valley of death located in sand country If where you make a turn around the second cliff at the far left
of the valley, you would find a cave filled with bats. Not just any bats, flying bats. Every day, these bats fly
in and out of the cave, enjoying the wind in their wings. All but one that is , this one bat's name was Aleister a small cute and fluffy little bat that had some very bad luck . For one, he couldn't fly for anything. He tried
and tried but he was un able to stay in the air for more than fifth-teen seconds. The other bats pity little Aleister
and helped him multiple times, but he just couldn't fly. Until now he couldn't fly. (Hafidzi 9.A)

THE BAT WHO COULDN'T FLY

Bee the bat just couldn't fly. However much she tried, she couldn't get her wings to lift her off the ground. When bee was a young bat, she used to bounce on her trampoline and try and lift herself up into the air. But, would never succeed. She became angry, as everyone around her could fly. A bee, a Fairy, even Superbear, and Bee started to cry. "Be patient, Bee! God is fair. You have other advantage, be grateful for now that you have." said the fairy encouragingly, Bee also stop crying.(Raffi Putri 9.B)

1.     upon a time ,there was a bad and his friends.one day a bad named Dodi,played with his friends,near with a small river.when they played ,they was very tired.so they take a rest in reforestation and fall asleep on the trees.when they slept ,there was a very big wind ,it could make the bads fall from the tree,and woken up.

A moment,after they fall from the tree,Dodi felt his body was painfull.and he couldn’t  flown,because his one of his wing was broken.but others friends just felt his body painfull.so they went home on foot.after arrived in his home Dody went to a doctor with his parents and take a rest.although Dody couldn’t flown again,but his friends decided play with him.Dody thankfull to his friend. (Hudlrotus Soutun 9.B)

once upon a time there was a bat sleeping during the day. lelapnya batasleep without realizing there are

    hunters who are after him. The hunter slowly want to catch the bat. The hunter had shot it right on the bat

    wings. The bat wings fell and bled, as heard gunshots were so loud thatresulted in all bats erbangun and

    stormed the hunter. the hunter ran, the bat wing can not be usedanymore, and bats can not fly forever. (Natasya Alya 9.B)

•  The Bat Who Couldn't Fly

         One day there are a bat the bat very happily,when the bat fly,he meet a eagle
         he bat accident with eagle,the bat direct to fall and one of wing has broken, after that
         the bat coudn't fly but the bat always happily (Taufiq Ramadan)

“The Bat Who Couldn’t Fly”

       There was,a bat at the tree in happy forest.The bat is,Bat.Batty though as the greatest mammal because it could fly.Batty is an arrogant bat.

       One day,mouse,pig,rabbit and dear invite Batty drinking tea and playing together,but Batty refused invitation.Finally,Batty got consequence from it deed.It wing fractured because when it fly,Batty to hit severely a tree.Her fiends help her at time it fall.Finally Batty apologize to her friends because her mistake.   (Andini Larasati 9.B)

The Bat Who couldn’t Fly

On one day there was a bat in the tree He was very sad because they can not fly.

            The bats can not fly because its wings injured. Tommorow night he crashed into a large tree.

            Then there are the bird appocoached and asked “why are you sad?””I Can not fly my wings injured” answer bat”should I treat the wound? Offer the bird”of course” answer bat” has been completed and the rest I treat practice”thank you” anwer bat (Berliana 9.A)

The Bat Who Couldn’t Fly

            Once upon a time there was a cruel bat named Bore, who couldn’t fly and live alone with his son (Kaka). His son was so generous not like his father.

            At the first, Bore was so nice and kind but since that accident when someone shot his wing, Bore became so mean and cruel. Because he wouldn’t have chance to fly like others bat.

           He was the king on that forest. So, he could do everything he want. But, the things he did everyday, only angry, angry, and angry. He could kill the other animals anytime he want it.

            One day, Kaka suddenly came to see his father. And he asked him when he could be a good king again, like before his wing was there. And Bore answered, when he had his wing back, so he could fly freely. And he could be a really nice king again. Without wasted any time, kaka flied to met Bigo.

           Bigo was a lion who could cure everything. Bigo said to give this rose to his father. Asked him to drank the water of rose. After received the rose, Kaka fastly back to home.

            After he reached his home, he asked his father to fastly drink the rose water. Without thought anything, his father drank all of the water. And amazingly, Bore has a wing again even better than before. And now he could fly very well. After that, Bore wasn’t a cruel king bat again. But he was the best bat king. (Anggita Rifa Candra 9.A)

10. The Bat Who Couldn’t Fly

Once upon a time, there lived two bat, Tom and Bety. Tomorow, Bety will gave birth to a child.

Then, Bety gave birth to a child. His name was James. James was a cute bat. It was very active. But, when James will studied to fly, James was fallen. His wing was damaged. Because this accident, James cannot fly. Then, James very sad.

James has a friend. His name was Snellie. Snellie was baby snake. Snelly always gave support to James. Slowly, James not sad again. Then, He always enjoyed his day. (Cita Aji 9.B)

Bat who couldn’t fly

One day there was a bat bus it couldn’t fly it was very sad because it’s friend could fly. One time he met with an old bat and it’s couldn’t. Fly too, but he made a fly macine and with this macine who couldn’t fly to made a fly macine amazingly the young bat could fly to the sky in the night. The old bat gave a message to the young bat. “if you couldn’t do something with your hands, do it with your brain.” After that the bat who couldn’t fly change become the bat who fly with a macine. (Tegar 9. A)

The bat who couldn't fly"
one day there was a bar bus if couldn't fly it was very sad because it's friend could fly. One time he met with an old bat and it's couldn't fly, too but he made a fly macine and with this macine he could fly,he teach he young bar could fly to the sky in the night the old bar gave a message to the young bar if you couldn't do something with your hands do it with your brain. after that the bar who couldn't fly change became the bar who fly with a macine.(Vindi Harisa)

the bat who couldn’t fly

One day there was a young bat named jhon he was very kind , but he couldn’t fly. he always mocked by his friends , so he haven’t any friends .

One day he take awalk in the forest, he was very sad in the middle of forest he met with an old bat that almost died of starvation, so jack gave him foods . after full the old bat asked to jack “why you look so sad ?”,”I always mocked by my friends because I couldn’t fly “answered jack .then the old bat say” if you csnt do something with your hand you could do it with your brain”, than jack think about that.so jack went home and have a plan to make a fly macine .then he made it .after that jack try that macine and amazingly he could fly ,then jack didn’t mocked by his friend again after that the bat who couldn’t fly changed become the bat who fly with a macine.(Nur Kholis Isna 9.A)

Bat Who Couldn’t Fly

Generally, every bat can fly. But, this bat can’t fly. Because this bat ever been got an accident. Then, it is be deformed wing. It just can walk in the cage. Maybe, the bat want to fly. But, it won’t happen. Forever… (Nurul Sholihah 9.B)

Bat Who Couldn’t Fly

     Once upon a time there lived a bat her name was Jasper. He lived in a very dark cave in the jungle. He lived happily together with his friends.

     One day, while the bats was taking a nap, a hunter came into the cave brought a gun. He was up to shoot Jasper when suddenly Jasper woke up. Being surprised Jasper tried to fly. Unfortunatly the hunter’s gun shoot Jasper wing. Jasper is fell down to the bushes. The hunter tried to find Jasper, but failed. Then the hunter desided to continue to hunting in another place.

     The sun had already set when Jasper opened his eyes. His was so painful. He was tried to move his wings but one of them wa batley hurt. He cried for help. It seemed that no one heard his crying, no one came. He strove to stand up and walk. Step by step, he walk to the cave.

     Jasper finally arrived at the cave at night. All of the bats were not there. They were out to look for food. Jasper was so hungry, and of course painful. However he was too weak and tried to find food for himself. He fell asleep.

     In the next orning, when Jasper opened his eyes he got suprised to see his friends were around him. His injured wing had been threatened. Some of them also offered some fruits for him. After having breakfast, Jasper told his friends about what happened to him yesterday. He asked his friends to be careful.

     Day by day passed, Jasper still could not fly like his friends. But, he self happy. Because of his disability to fly, he did not need to find fruits for him self. His friends provided him food evryday and he was in charge of savin some fruits us the stock for the bats for the next winter. (Galuh Widiasih 9.B)

The Bat Who Couldn’t Fly

         Onceupon time, there is the bat that sleep in tree. He is sad because every day must look for food for his family. Tomorrow, he look for food in forest. He find many food. He is very happy. He goes home and bring many food. He doesn’t know if in that forest there is hunter. The hunter bring weapons. The hunter shoot bat wings. The bat is fall, but the hunter doesn’t know where is the bat is fall. The bat is sad. Because he couldn’t fly. (Alfin 9.B)

The bat who could’n fly

             One day a bat live in the jungle.His name Dino other bat always mock his because, he couldn’t fly like his friend.

             One day, other bat was injured, because the wings was broken struck down by big stone. Dino came to his friend, and helped his friend. Sine the incideent, other bat never mock his again. (Dicky Hengki 9.A)

The Bat Who couldn't fly
        Once there was a bat named Bruce who was scared to fly because he was afraid of heights. One day his mother said Bruce had to fly to find his own food because he was old enough. He didn’t want to but his mom had some advice for him. She told him not to look down. Bruce went to the entrance of the cave that night. He ran, then jumped and then flapped his wings hard to fly! From that day on, he never looked down again.(Pradhika Janu 9.A)

The Bat Who Couldn't Fly
    One day, there was a little brown bat. He lived in a big cave. He had 12 brothers and sisters. They fly together. When a little brown bat fly, suddenly he got hurt on his right wing and he fell to the ground and he cried. He called her mom and dad to help him. They had come and his mam and dad asked what had happened. He exlplained all the bad experience he had got. And that time when the bats were ready to fly, a little brown bat couldn't follow because he couldn't fly.(Rohmah Azizah 9.A)

1.     Jurney  on a pirate ship

                  One day,I read the novel,it’s a pirate ship.the story is very good. I imagine clim of a pirate ship.how beautiful a pirate ship (Devi Ristiana 9.A)

The Bat who Couldn't FlyOn a beautiful sunday night, the bats a woke from they sleep and running around looking from food. All bats ran with joy, but there was one bat that fell when she tired to fly.Bats out of energy and it turns out her bones broken. Bats was very sad because she could not fly anymore.But because the presence of her loyal boyfriend she was not sad anymore because her boyfriend entertained by friends (Stevani Cyntia 9.A)

The Bat Who Couldn’t Fly

One day there was a goat family,they have annoyed life because of a dog that always disturb and chase their life.One day their child play on the yard but the meet a bulldog,”Hello bull ! May we play with you?”,asked the child goat,”No,may not,go away from my yard please!I don’t want to see a bad goat like you!Raawrr”,bulldog said angrily and chase them.Until home they say to their mother,”Mom,I want to play with Bull,but he don’t want and he always try to chase us,help me please!Make him to be a bad bat Mom!”,the oldest goat said,”Okay I’ll make the Bull become a Bat.Abrakadabrakasyukasyutrulalamashamishabullbibat Juhh! Have dooonee! I have made Bull become a bat,check it dear!”,said the mother,”Thanks a lot mom! I love you ! Byeee!,lets check Bull!”,said Teta the oldest goat.

“Where is Bulldog Teta?”,asked Mega then Teta looking up on the tree there is a bat shout.”Hoy!I’m here ! what do you want ? How can I change to be a bad bat?”,said the Bulldog and the goat laugh out load after they see the Bull.”Hi Bullbat! What do you do in the afternoon,don’t be noisy ! you must sleep now because tonight you’ll looking for your fruit!Hahaha”,said Mega.”Shut up Mega! Go away !”,said the Bullbat then they go away leave him alone.

“Hi! Where are you from ? I never see you.”,asked a small bat to Bull.”My name is Bull,who are you?”,Bullbat answer.”Bull?Oke Bull lets fly.”,The small bat invite Bull.Because Bull is a dog so he can’t fly and always fall down when he fly,so he don’t have a bat friend.But the goats always visit him and give some fruit and insect.”Teta,please change me again to be a dog,I don’t want to be a bat,I can’t fly Teta,I promise,I’ll not annoyed you again,I swear Teta.”,asked Bulldog then the child goats accepted Bull’s promise and say to their mother to make Bull back to be a dog.

Then Bullbat back to be a Bulldog and they life happily ever after. (Urmila 9.A)

  The Bot Who Couldn't Fly

                  One day there was a has bus if couldn't fly it was verry sad because it's friend could fly one time he met with an old bar and it's couldn't fly too but he mad a fly macine         and with thise macine he could fly. He teach he young ber who couldn't fly to mad a fly macine too. Amazingly the young bar could fly to the sky in the night. The old bar gave a         massage to the young bar "if you wouldn't do something with your hands do it with your bain". An after that the bar who couldn't fly change be came the bar who fly with a                 macine. (Qodrun Nadha 9.A)

The Bat Who Couldn't Fly" :

Once there was a bat named Bruce who was scared to fly because he was afraid of heights. One day his mother said Bruce had to fly to find his own food because he was old enough. He didn't want to but his mom had some advice for him. She told him not to look down. Bruce went to the entrance of the cave that night. He ran, then jumped and then flapped his wings hard to fly!. From that day on, he never looked down again, and finally he could fly to find his own foods. (Mita Jamiatin 9.A)

My Journey On A Pirate Ship
Last year i went to treasure island. I went there with my friends. We went to the treasure island by a pirate ship. My friends who followed me are John, Patrick, Sandy, and Tom. In pirate ship i was very happy, i went from blora until the treasure island. The times we need was three hours. In the journey i saw many good view and many dolphin fish. And also there were many small island. Thirty minutes later i had arrived at treasure island. At treasure island there were ancient animals. I was surprised when there was a mummy went to me. Actually the mummy was treasure island keeper. He said to me that we could get what we want but we must give it to a person who need it. After we take the treasure, we went home by the pirate ship again, many times later we arrived at home, and we directly went to orphanage and gave it to all chidren, i was happy because this was my best experience. (Brillian 9.E)

 The Bat Who Couldn't Fly

Once upon a time in a far off kingdom there was a bat who couldn’t fly. His name was Bernard. Now don’t you be holding that against him. Bernard had always wanted to fly; he tried very hard at it, a lot harder than his 14 sisters, and 181 cousins, and even harder than his 534 second cousins. In fact flying was pretty much instinctive to everyone except Bernard. Of course his poor mother didn’t know what to do. She had tried everything, physiotherapy, dentistry, psychoanalysis, well lots of complex word things. In the end everyone gave up, and Bernard felt sad. Then one day whilst Bernard was at the stream, Bernard looked at himself in the reflection, then to his 534 second cousins, then back to himself, then to his 181 cousins, then back to himself, then to his 14 sisters, then to himself and finally to his mother, before abruptly turning back to himself. And that was when Bernard realised he wasn’t a bat at all. (Siti Ni'matus Saadah 9.B)

"The Bat Who Couldn't Fly" here we go:

    One afternoon, there were some bats who fly through the sky, one of them is a baby bat who couldn’t fly well like another bats who were older than him. Their home was broken by some hunter. Willy nilly to safe their life they have to fly soon avoid the hunters, even that was sleeping time. A baby bats couldn’t bear his sleepy, he thought it’s fine if he take a sleep for a moment while flying. Then he flied slower and slower, he didn’t realize that his friend was left him behind. Finally when he woke up he didn’t see any bat flied over him. He was worried and he couldn’t control his balance so, he hited a tree and fell down. His wings was broken and no one knew that. He felt lonely in the forest. Then some animals came and helped him to fly, but it couldn’t. They said the baby bats couldn’t fly forever. The baby bat was sad but a deer said “it’s fine, look you can take a good thing here, we can be a friends!, sad will never give you wings to fly!” so, a baby bat realized and they lived happily ever after there. (Amartia Sandra 9.C)

My Journey on a Pirate Ship
I woke up in a beautiful beach. Suddenly some one push me into a ship. When I look upward actually it was a pirate ship! I was confused. Why I could be here. They commanded me to clean the ship with others. When I was working, someone get out from a room. I think he is the captain but I recognize him. He is Rio, so I tried to talk with him. "Hi Rio.." I said. "Who are you? Go away from me!" He shouted. I was more confuse but suddenly I was thrown into the sea. I was shocked, and I feel wet. I.woke up in my bed room. My mother had just wake me up. "Oh it's just my dream." I say it to my self. It was a strange dream. (Amalia PN 9.D)

 I was a pirate . I pass many ocean in the world . One time I went to Bermuda triangle with my friends . When my ship so close with bermuda triangle suddenly there was whirlpool . My ship fall into the whirlpool . Fortunately the was rock close to me so I can hold on the rock and I survived my life.(Junita 9.D)

The Bat Who Couldn't Fly

       Once upon a time,there are the bat life happyly unfortunately he cant't fly when he was born,but he

       always pray full and happy.(Firza 9.B)

The Bat who couldn't Fly

          one day there are a bat,the bat very hapily. when the bat fly,the bat meet the eagle . the bat accident with eagle. the bat direct to fall

      and one of the wing broken. this time the bat couldn't fly  but the bat always pray and happy.

(Akbar Rizky 9.B)